You are nearly there, but a good closing line would be nice.

I did make a couple quick edits in a couple places. Nothing definative tho.
G/l w/ finishing it strong and getting it in. Best of luck

Ill let you know how it all goes

thanks guys

I owe ya!

the closing statement

In the words of William Arthur Ward “If you can imagine it, you can achieve it; if you can dream it, you can become it.”

and im submitting it right now!

Here's one of my favorite quotation when I was in college taking up Mech'l engineering:

"Neccessity is the mother of all invention."

This was attributed to Plato who stated, "Necessity, who is the mother of invention.

I used to piss off my professors when I said, "Desparation, not necessity is the mother of invention" :lol::lol::mdr:.

Anyway, good luck.

Finally
 

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