[jayjay283]

pretty good, your thesis staement is at the end it seems .. id go, ( im not English major by any means just my 2 cents)

For the past few years ive been thinking about college a lot and the one thing that sticks out in my mind is engineering. ever since i was a little kid i remember always loving to play with electronics and some type of gadget or device. You would not see me playing with toy soldiers or mini Trex's; No i was the boy who wanted to learn how the remote to the television worked. I'm not sure what it was, but buttons, lights, just anything electric fascinated me.



and I do agree maybe something more pertinent to your recent growth as an individual ( I have the memory or a turd but remember some great eurpoe pictures you took)



cheesy is key, most people who work at colleges ( no offence) are liberal oddballs who are stuck dealing with after teen crisis kids scared to face reality and are messed up, just want to know you have your head on straight

BTW I had a nun write my recommendation letter, sweet touch