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I think you will do just fine whatever you write. How many people do they reject? The bottom 10 percent of glass lickers. Your gpa and your ability to articulate tell me that whatever you write will be enough to get you in, and when they realize you have money to pay them you are definately in. (it is a business, after all) That being said, having proof read your first draft, I don't think you have to worry about it. Oh, and the punctuation for your motto should look like this: My motto is, "go big, or go home, and I never go home". Good luck man.