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t-maxxracer32 · 12.04.2008, 10:59 PM

you both are right.

that thesis statement is much better than mine.

and if i keep the sentence about my motto in there ill edit it. im not sure if im going to leave it in there as it is sort of outta context id say...

thanks for the help! keep the editing coming!

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t-maxxracer32 RC-Monster Brushless Offline Posts: 2,184 Join Date: Nov 2006	12.04.2008, 10:59 PM you both are right. that thesis statement is much better than mine. and if i keep the sentence about my motto in there ill edit it. im not sure if im going to leave it in there as it is sort of outta context id say... thanks for the help! keep the editing coming!