[jayjay283]

this is what I left him in his book, he writes songs and they are pretty depressing. I took from you Jerry and wrote this to him, Its days old and Im not trying to write a song or anything id spend more time and put it in iambic pentamiter (sp?) It really caught his attention so I thought I'd dump it on Mikes hard drive incase it helps anyone else

If you steal from me you used your own 2 hands
If you don't get into college its because you chose not to study with your own 2 hands
If you don't have a car its because you chose not to work more, enough or save with your own 2 hands
Life is about what you can achieve with your own 2 hands. Look at your hands and think about what you can accomplish.


It kind of relates to how he blamed his issues on everyone but himself. Then I was thinking what about a war vet who lost a hand. I had a line about building a sand castle as a kid and the feeling, but hes never been to the beach. Anyway thought id drop it incase