engineering scholarship essay. what do you think?

[PedeBasher]

I can do some corrections for you. I know when someone tells you to take commas and shit out it can be hard. Obviously you put them in there thinking they were correct so you most likely wont find all the errors.

It wasnt horrible but again, there were some run ons and extra commas. Your spelling was spot-on. Again, let me know if you want me to help with some corrections so you can get directed in the right direction on knowing how your next paragraphs should be.