engineering scholarship essay. what do you think?

[t-maxxracer32]

Well i would like to say that i did not copy anything from google, but you are 100% right. I do jump topics and its one of the many downfalls I have in writing..

Since my personal speech is not very "smart or professional" it is real hard to write like that as you mentioned.

ill fix those sentenses that you mentioned.

[JThiessen]

Originally Posted by t-maxxracer32

Since my personal speech is not very "smart or professional" it is real hard to write like that as you mentioned.

Isn't that what you said about a year ago when you asked for help on a paper then? If you go back and look at that one, your writing now is vastly better than it was then. I seem to recall that I could hardly make it through one paragraph of that paper....
Communcation skills should be considered one of the top three characteristics when hiring professional employees....