engineering scholarship essay. what do you think?

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Its funny i looked up that paper before i posted this because I wasnt sure if that other paper was on this same topic.. Its nice to hear that I have improved and maybe i dont notice it but with friends i don't see an improvement in speech.

good to know my writing has improved some..

arct1k- I changed your sentences that you mentioned and when doing so I looked over them to see if i can change a few of your wording because i dont want to copy exactly what you wrote but honestly i don't know how to change any of it without losing its purpose. let me know if you do not want me using your words and ill find another way to say it because if you do not mind i will just keep it like you put it.. Sounds a hell of a lot more professional than how i had it.

Oh and BTW this paper is due on the 31st if i did not mention that. Around wednesday or Thursday i will be turning it in because i do not want to be one of those few who turn it in 5 minutes before its due.. --something i usually do.. but for this i feel that it will be looked down on--