engineering scholarship essay. what do you think?

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Oh and BTW this paper is due on the 31st if i did not mention that. Around wednesday or Thursday i will be turning it in because i do not want to be one of those few who turn it in 5 minutes before its due.. --something i usually do.. but for this i feel that it will be looked down on--[/QUOTE]

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